Holy shizzle, I'd bawl my eyes out if you did that!! Chances are you won't soar either.....you'll fall.....painfully.....je;afkldsafkj....don't do that hun!!!!!!!!!!!! We're meatball hoagies, remember???? Good examples?? lol!! I hope you're alright!! Stay positive!!!

~Sierra

__MEATBALL HOAGIE#2__

wow that is really good....5/5

I liked the way you asked questions and then later answered them. That was very creative. This is just my opinion, I think if you took few of the lines and switched them around a bit it would flow better. Anyway, I liked the creative idea good work! Take Care! Brooke~

Sorry, I didn't mean you ansewerd the questions. You asked the questions and then went on to how you feel! Sorry I'm a bit tired.

Awwwww.....don't give up.... If you ever need anyone to listen, I will always be here for you. Please don't forget that. :o)

((((((Big Hugs)))))))

Michelle

AWW this poem is so sad!!!*tear Great job and you an excellent writer...