The first cut is the deepest

by ©TheCornerOfTheEnd   Jul 13, 2005


The first cut is the deepest
trust me i no
just one second did it take
it was not a mistake
i know what i was doing all along
and if i told some one
they would say it was wrong
but u no Wat i don't care
my mother hates me
my father hates me
she z to me why did u not say good bye
so i did reply
i didn't say good bye because i did not say hello
he total blanked me he paced two and fro, u no what i give up
with my last breath,
my last drop of blood,
and I'm not hated any more,
and if i was 2 come back they would treat me different
so they should while they have the chance

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  • 19 years ago

    by **baby_girl**

    babe u shudnt worry bout ur parents theyll cum round serious bev loves ya so do me nd verity so hey look on da bright side love ya loads c ya soon xx he he he : )

  • 19 years ago

    by Emily

    hey. you lost me on the middle part of the poem but overall 3/5 and thars true the first cut is the deepest thats the most seen scar for me keep writing and check out some of mine