You're gone

by Britney   Jul 13, 2005


I still can remember,
The smile on your face.
Now that your gone,
No one can take your place.

I still can remember,
Looking into those deep blue eyes.
Now that your gone,
I find myself asking “why”.

I still can remember,
You always being there.
Now that your gone,
The pains hard to bear.

I still can remember,
You holding me tight.
Now that your gone,
No one can make things right.

I still can remember,
The day that you died.
Now that your gone,
I want to run and hide.

I still can remember,
The funeral day.
Now that your gone,
I promise my love will never go astray.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Carmen

    Overall, awesome poem, but the last stanza was confusing... "Now that you're gone, I promise my love for you will never go astray"? thats kinda confusing... like saying if the person was still alive(or there), then you wouldnt love them? im sorry, just a little confused x.x

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    So sad but beatifully written! I can totally understand where you are coming from in this poem. Stay strong, i am going to! Thanks again :)

  • 19 years ago

    by .

    Aww this is really sad....i really like it though 5/5 deffinately your a very good writer
    Ps. I tried to comment on your poem called A wish? or something like that...but anyways OMG it was SO good it reminded me so much of this one night lol like i coudn't have said it better myself! ha i gave it a 5 too!
    Thanks for the comment
    Becky

  • 19 years ago

    by Jamie

    I liked this alot i think some areas were forced but mostly flowed well i could really relate to this up until the person died but just losing somebody close to you...great job 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Renee

    This is extremely sad. But pain is a part of life, and so is losing the people we love. We just have to learn to move on with our lives, and most importantly live for those who have died for us. I hope all is well with you

    Take Care,
    Renee

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