wow this flowed beautifully, it was very creative, i loved it!!!

Awesome poem! I know I have you feel. Keep up the great work. You have alot of talent. xX

Once again, I get amazed by writers who can rhyme with every 2 lines, i tried and i suck! so that takes talent! great job 5/5

Another great piece. Flowed great and just wow. Your a great writer hun. Keep up the great work!

Much Lvoe
~*hAiLy*~

I know exactly what you mean...

Broken friendships are very hard to mend.

My favourite lines were:

"Say you'll try or say you may,
At least keep the promise that you'll stay."

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

Everyone has to leave us one day...it's just a matter of time...just stay strong...and don't be sad...i know you are...cause you know the guy i mention earlier...i don't know who am i going to tell my problems with...or who's gonna make me happy...if he do leave me...oooohhhhhh..:'(

Oh, and thanks a lot for your comments...you are so sweet....and your poems are really great...keep up the great work...can't wait to see more...

Another amazing poem! Such a sad thing.. :'( Keep up the outstanding work amy :)

This is really good. Just like all of your other peoms! 5/5 Keep it up.
Becky
xoxo

I understand totally, i've felt this way before. You'll be ok cos i was. We have to be strong for ourselves and the other person. Keep it up, great piece :)

Very good... the rhymes are amazing.... 5/5....

I love the rhyming in this poem, makes it flow really well. xx