I couldn't even cry

by FlowerThatDied   Jul 13, 2005


Watching every motion in this dark, mysterious life,
On this endless ocean where storm are our punishment,
Turning and returning to some secret place inside
Watching these evil inhuman creatures attack our world,

It takes me to tears
Every single time it opens up my fears

Watching I keep waiting still anticipating happiness
Never hesitating that we'll become the fated one
Turning and returning to some secret place to hide
From the rath that will take this world because hatred we provide,

It takes me to tears

Through the hourglass I saw paradise, in time it slipped away
When the hourglass crashed I knew our chances were up and turned to hear God say
"If only for today I am unafraid
The worlds caused me such pain,
In giving you all this gift love I have not gained,
So I'm taking back my love care and time,
Because what you've done to this world surely its a crime,

Watching every motion as the world deteriarates
Haunted by the notion somewhere there's another person dying in the flames,
Turning and returning to some secret place inside
Watching in slow motion as people start to die,

I just watched my love die...
I couldn't even cry ....

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  • 19 years ago

    by Forsaken Redeemer

    hey i think this poems great, my kinda thing aswell. fantastic. philosophical. thought-provoking. i luv it.

    xXx

  • 19 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    these are great words and I liked the poem alot. some of your peoms that i've read don't flow as well as they could with time as u get older you'll develope the "flow" ability. but keep writing and try to get more rhyme in your poems and you;ll find they flow better, keep writting anf thx for rating my poem