by Kayla Jul 13, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Oh innocent girl, |
by Ashley
I'm here for ya hunny baby darlin'!!!! really!! Great poem, but it's sad that it's you in the end...(well, it was you in the beginning, but we found out in the end) You're a good writer! Keep it up! Love yas! |
What made you turn to tears, |
I say well done...I know many people who have similar thoughts and questions...and the last line was an interesting twist... |
by Emilia
Great poem.. I voted a 5! =D please check out any of my poems.. hugs! |
by Katie
Wow! This poem was amazing. I know how hard it can be once you turn to the blade, but all you can do is try to stay strong. I wish you the best of luck. Great poem. Keep up the talent! 5/5! |