Thats a interesting idea for a poem...god i made me cry....please dont leave...please...stay strong
xxxxxx

that was really good! 5/5

hey, loved how different this poem is, it works well and is powerful 5/5 well dunxxx

this is so powerfully sad. of someone running away from a friend who is willing to be there for them, just they don't want to hurt this friend. powerful! i feel so sad now! i hope things are ok!

~PLP~ lil slam~

very unique style, what a great and funny idea....A bit confusing though!!! high 5 for you sweet girl...

*Love sabrina*

very good poem! 5 It flowed nicely ad is very neat!!!

I read the whole thing and then read every line but "cannot take the agony" and I have to say I liked it much better without that line. I think you over did it a little with that line. Maybe it would work at the end of every stanza but between every line was a bit much.

Let me go
Let me go
Let me go
Let me go
I'm sorry
I love you
Always hate me
Always love you
Bitter, twisted
the real me
Bitter twisted
the real me
These lines also took away from the poem a bit. Each of those stanzas flowed a lot differently than the rest of the poem. But then again the uniqueness is refreshing.

I also don't think the **stars are necessary as they distract from the poem. (My opinion) I think they take away a lot while the reader is trying to keep focused on the words.

It's your writing I can only make suggestions and let you take them how you want.

I think this poem would be great if you decided to make a few changes...but fine if you don't. The emotion in the poem really got your feelings across. Nicely done! :)