gr8 poem hun!!!!!I agree with Jimmeh, you can like have a part two to this poem or you could just add to it....overall gr8 job tho!!!!*HUGGKES* <3 Elizabeth

gr8 improvement...i think its a lot better now!!!!!And thanks for commenting on my poem!!!!!!*Huggkes*<3Elizabeth

hi meg this really good, you are a really good poet!!!!

can i have some chocolate yet?

Vikki is that all you think about is getting my chocolate

no of course not (yes it is! - Amy)

pretty please le t me have chocolate vikki tried to steal it and i didn't and i truely think ur poms r grat unlike vikki hu just think sbout chocolate! xxx - Amy xxx

hey that is not true!!! i do think she is a good poet!!! i just want some chocolate!!!

i have cravings too u know! - Amy ( i can't be botehrd to sign in as me lol) xxx

will you stop useing this to talk to me im right next to you!!!

but its funny!!!

hi im in english and im bored so im gunna talk to you on here again!