The Life I've Been Given!

by Hayley Marie   Jul 13, 2005


*By the first paragraph, i think you can tell i feel low. I wrote this poem just a second ago, and I just feel really weak*

I’m feeling low,
I’m feeling down,
I cannot smile,
I can only frown.

I feel all alone,
Like nobody’s near,
I’m sat here writing this,
As I shed another tear.

My Nan told me,
To cuddle my dad,
She said I’d feel better,
I really wish it had.

He spends more time with Liam,
And not much with me,
I’m not jealous,
I just want my daddy!!

I don’t feel right,
I feel really weak,
I feel dismantled,
Some love is what I seek.

I’m very much like the air,
Make very little sound,
Never to be seen,
And never to be found.

I don’t like the way I am,
Or the way I’m living,
I cant really do nothing,
This isthe life, I’ve been given.

~Thank you for reading!!~

*Depression*Is*An*Illness* ©

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  • awww that was sad hope everythings ok it was good though im off to read part 2!

  • 19 years ago

    by Hayley Marie

    hun, if i could change the way i feel.. honestly i swear i would! but i've tried! and i end up back here again :(

  • 19 years ago

    by DANI

    please dont feel like that!!!! that poem made me cry....:( your not air.... you are the world 2 me!!! your dad is there 4 you he will be.... i promise.... dont be sad.....plez... if i could id give you a hug!!!!!! cheer up 4 me...... dani xxxx its a good poem 5/5