Comments : To My Unborn Child...

  • 18 years ago

    by Unbreakable

    I'm touched by your writing, it's truly amazing.

  • 18 years ago

    by katie taylor

    That was a awsome poem congrats if you do have a baby

  • 18 years ago

    by iluvnate

    AWSOME!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jess

    OMG this is so good. This is a greeat poem and it is sooooooo sweet. Keep up the good work. 5/5
    xoxoxoxox
    Jess

  • 18 years ago

    by Never*gonna*make*it

    Thats priceless

  • 18 years ago

    by David

    Nyc

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristian

    Awwww wow that made me cry =) that was an excellent poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by Raelyn

    It's beautiful!

  • 17 years ago

    by Elizabeth

    I have always said that the best thing anyone could do is love their child. So if you have 1 on the way... congrats and if not... you will make that kid proud some day. Nice work, It came from the heart.

  • 17 years ago

    by ABake

    I love the whole theme of this poem, it also shows a strong emotion of love that i think every parent has for a child even those that are unborn lol1
    5/5
    xoxo-am

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Another Dreamer

    Wow. I must say- you sure do have a way with words. In both of your poems that I have read so far, my jaw has dropped and I've just ben in awe! You're so talented. You really are. Great job. Amazing poem. 5/5 no doubt!

  • 17 years ago

    by Barry

    Absolutely blown away!!
    This is beautifully worded.....
    and is special so is my son Matthew!!!

    Off the chart! Brill.....

  • 17 years ago

    by azii

    I loved this!! It's fabulous!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cassandra Wojick

    This is such a great poem... amazing!5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by kylah

    Wow!! that was really sweet of u to do that for your son if its true!! if it is i hope u enjoy having a son.
    ~kylah~

  • 17 years ago

    by DREA

    0OK THiS iS T0O SWEET && T0O G0OD...H0W D0 U D0 iT...I WANNA HEAR M0RE...I L0VE THE ADViCE && I AGREE 0N EVERYTHiN U SAY..DAMN UR W0MAN iS LUCKY T0 HAVE Y0U!! ♥

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent poem i really enjoyed it, nice words, nice style and a very strong but touching ending, good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Katrina

    I am really happy for you, I am having a son tooo, and this poem really made me think about the importance of life!! you have a gift, and I like that!! well congratulations on your son, and to your girl as well, I hope the best for you 2.

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle

    Excellent poem! love it! 5/5!

    i just found out i'm pregnant. i'm a first timer and nervous as hell. please pray for my child and i.

    if a girl, we plan on naming her Makaela Ann Cleveland.. if a boy, Matthew Cleveland. we aren't sure on a middle name for the boy yet. :)

    Michelle

  • 17 years ago

    by shelley

    Hey all ur stuff is amazing, ive really enjoyed reading them ... keep up the good work =D x