by Unbreakable
I'm touched by your writing, it's truly amazing. |
by katie taylor
That was a awsome poem congrats if you do have a baby |
by iluvnate
AWSOME!!!!!!! |
by Jess
OMG this is so good. This is a greeat poem and it is sooooooo sweet. Keep up the good work. 5/5 |
Thats priceless |
by David
Nyc |
by Kristian
Awwww wow that made me cry =) that was an excellent poem! |
by Raelyn
It's beautiful! |
by Elizabeth
I have always said that the best thing anyone could do is love their child. So if you have 1 on the way... congrats and if not... you will make that kid proud some day. Nice work, It came from the heart. |
by ABake
I love the whole theme of this poem, it also shows a strong emotion of love that i think every parent has for a child even those that are unborn lol1 |
Wow. I must say- you sure do have a way with words. In both of your poems that I have read so far, my jaw has dropped and I've just ben in awe! You're so talented. You really are. Great job. Amazing poem. 5/5 no doubt! |
by Barry
Absolutely blown away!! |
by azii
I loved this!! It's fabulous! |
This is such a great poem... amazing!5/5 |
by kylah
Wow!! that was really sweet of u to do that for your son if its true!! if it is i hope u enjoy having a son. |
by DREA
0OK THiS iS T0O SWEET && T0O G0OD...H0W D0 U D0 iT...I WANNA HEAR M0RE...I L0VE THE ADViCE && I AGREE 0N EVERYTHiN U SAY..DAMN UR W0MAN iS LUCKY T0 HAVE Y0U!! ♥ |
by Wallace
Excellent poem i really enjoyed it, nice words, nice style and a very strong but touching ending, good job. |
by Katrina
I am really happy for you, I am having a son tooo, and this poem really made me think about the importance of life!! you have a gift, and I like that!! well congratulations on your son, and to your girl as well, I hope the best for you 2. |
by Michelle
Excellent poem! love it! 5/5! |
by shelley
Hey all ur stuff is amazing, ive really enjoyed reading them ... keep up the good work =D x |