Do u understand how amazing this poem is, i felt so touched and its not even to me, you definetly have such talent and inspiration
5/5
check out some of mine

Thats so cute.
Truely beautiful.

All the fathers to be and fathers should go through this beautiful piece of work.great job.

Aww..lots of people obviously like your poem

This is such an exrodinary poem!!! such feeling!! and what good words of wisdom i must say, if its true.. you will make a wonderful father!!! congratuialtions... i've written a few peoms about my son aswell... your welcome to read them.. my favorite one is tittled "my unborn son." this is just an amaizeing way to express.. don't stop writeing!!!
5/5
-Marina

I really like this poem its really good !!! cheak mine out some time and commet them thanx!
<3

This is a great poem ^^.

Nice poem! Love It!!

This is a wondeer touching most beautiful poem i had every read well done

Wonderful poem as always. I loved all the advise you wrote, everything went together amazingly. I love all your poems, please do keep writing

Great poem, loved it.

Awwww

soooo sweet

That was amazing and simply beautiful

This has to be one of the sweetest poems i have ever read...5/5

Man i loved the way u expressed ur love to ur unseen son... guess thats pretty much what u would tell ur son the day u have one... 5 star poem dude

OMG!!..this is so sweet!.. you wrote this poem with so much emotion added to it!.
it was beautifully written. I hope ur son gets to read this when hes older.
Beautifully written!
I would tell u all the stuff i liked, bit by bit, but that's to long to say, so basically overall, u did a fantastic job!
i loved it all!
absolutly beautiful!
Aly

This is awesome^^ n.n I loved every single bit of it!

Awwww...that is the sweetest thing....good job!!!

Omg i really loved that, what i loved the most was the advice i no how had it is to bring a child into his world and wonder what they arte going to be...but well done very touching:)

Omg i really loved that, what i loved the most was the advice i no how had it is to bring a child into this world and wonder what they are going to be like ..but well done very touching:)