That was the most sensory senteneced affectioate poem I have ever read. The passion and the affection really showed in this miraculous poem. Unbelieveable job!

amazing matt, this poem shows true love. do u really have a son? if u dont, u sure fooled me. i didnt think any person especially a guy (no offence) could have such passion like that unless its from experience. great job keep writing

Wow, This is an amazingpoem. Congrats if there is a little one on the way. You sound liek you'll be an amazing father, and poet! Great job!

THAT WAS AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL! IM IN TEARS! YOUR LOVE FOR YOUR UNBORN SON SHOWS THROUGH YOUR WORDS, GREAT JOB! ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL! 5!

That is one of the most touching poems I've ever heard.

Congratulations if you are expecting your son.
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omg that was soooo good 5/5 plez r/c mine if you have the time

5/5. excellent job. my dad dies went i was 2 so i never really knew him. reading your poem, i hope he felt the same way bout me as you do bout your son.

wow

Awwe! That was such a sweet poem! Keep writing and good luck with the baby! Please vote and comment on mine please! I can't wait to read more of your stuff! 5/5

that poem is absolutely beautiful. you're gonna make an amazing dad. congratulations =).

dat was one of the best poems i have even read...it is so nice to see a father care n love his son so much..i wish my dad was like that...anywayz..don't let me get emotional now lol...great poem!!! 5/5...u got true talent!!

truly an amzing poem. you have a gift for writing but you shold already know that. great poetry.

That's a really sweet poem.
I really liked it.

Rebecca.

WOW i loved it did this really happen? this is a geat poem. its very sweet 5/5

Oh my god, this is the most sweetest, loving and beautiful poem I have ever read. It brought tears to my eyes. You are going to be the bestest daddy ever and your new baby boy will be the luckiest little guy!!!!!!!!

Best of luck to you!!!!!!!

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

That's very sweet and very good. I'm sure when he's older he'll love it. Or you could always read it to him now...and every day until he can read it himself. Start a tradition like that...he'd probably like that.

Awesome poem. Congrats on the baby. U will be a great dad and ur girl is lucky to have u by her side. Keep up tha writing.
-Moranda

this is OMG so touching.........it almost makes me wanna cry... i love this poem i love all of ur poems i mean i am like speechless....wow 5/5

5/5 GREAT POEM I HOPE YOUR BABY BOY IS BORN BEAUTIFUL JUST FOR YOU :)

that soooooooooooo cuite keep writing ok and check out my poems