omg ,thats an amaing poem ! have u really got a kid on the way if so , congrats :) teach him the ways of the world :) sarah x x x x

so sweet and heart felt
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M2Heart

Wow

~*~ Oh MaH God ThIs PoEm Is SoO SwEeT~*~

that is beautiful! your going to be the perfect dad! contiunue the great work!

aww...this is soo sweet...u'll be a great dad since u have already shown u care. best wishes for the future.

aawww.... such a cute, sweet heartfelt poem.. it deeply touched my heart.. u reli got a son on da way?? if so, congrats.. wen's he due??i totally adore ur poem.. gr8 advice 4evry1, reli u r reli gr8.. u gonna be a gr8 parent.. u already are.. i absolutely love ur kindness..
keep up the love
take care
nouna
plz comment on my poems if u can.. thnx

I loved the poem!!!! Though I do not think I would like my parents planning for my own future without me. That would make me upset. I would not like it very much!!

awesome

Hey what a beautiful poem!!!!!!!!
i really loved it..touching lines..so meaningful and great
you keep ur good work and good luck with the comings!
Yours
Nema
XxxxXxX

That's really sweet, you express your feelings really well, keep it up XxXx
Charli ~*~

awesome poem! if only all new dads could have that outlook on it. your son is truely lucky to have you there for him! i look forward to reading more of your poems!

This is turly an amazing poem, so heartfelt and wonderful. I do hope you give this to your son because it is nothing less then amazing. All I can say is that i truly love it and if i could give it more than a 5/5 i would. Also I must say this is one of the best love poems i have ever read, truly, truly beautiful. keep writing.
Love always
Jelly Bn

A great way for any man to live his life. You created a really wonderful thing here

This was so beautiful. :) Great job!

That was beautifull.........5/5

i think id have to invent a new word to descripe that. just wow.
keep it up, kat

wow-that was just SO SWEET! man...*sighs* i wanna have a kid or four some day...hope i can still write by then-and maybe even a bit like you-but i doubt it-i got so much to learn...well, i wanna say that that really touched to it-whether i can relate to it or not...so thanx-for writing such an awesome poem....+_+...laterz...

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....thats soo sweet...its soo touching and stuff.love it!
-mikki

oh wow!!! thats so sweet i love your poem...keep up the good work...