that was. great.

truely<33

I love the way you express yourself in this poem. I could feel the love just reading it! Awsome poem. I'd love to hear what you think bout some of mine. I'm adding you to my favs list!!

Hey man i love that poem of yours, you have given your son, some great advice, i hope your son lives by that advice you have given him, because there are not too many fathers out there who give their sons good advice at all, my father gave me great advice and i turned out to be a real good man, my father cared for me, when half of the time my mom wasn't there for me, but i still love my mom just as much as my dad, but i got alot more respect for my dad, but anyways i give you all the credit in the world for that magnificient poem, that you made, i hope your life is grand with your son and your woman, your whole life

WOW! nice job i know that i have a rele long way to reach this perfect level in writing.

Plz read some of my poems n give me some comment abt how i can be like u in writing.

I really like that poem. I know why but for personal reasons. Keep writing he good stuff
Corr^pt'dDr_mr

i am soo speachless.. amazing doesnt even begin to describe this poem.. I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!

very well written.. im sure your goin to be a wonderful dad and teach ur son alot...
best wishes
becky

awww that was sooo sweet i hope ur son has a great life

Yay, I'm comment 200 and voter 1000!!!!

Anyways, again, beautiful poem, and always the best of luck to your family

*~Bridgey~*

wow! i ant belive it! that the best poem i have read!! ur a awesome writer!! good luck to u and ur son. he is so lucky to have a father like you. u knw someone to look up to everyday. and someone he can trust on and belive in. ur gonna be a perfect rolmodle on him. and i hope ur girl is reallyhappy with you and stays in ur life cause shewuld be missing out in alot if she left! ur a great person. good job. 5/5

i was like damn dunt cry now! But yeah it was good!

lovely poem filled with true beauty. if you follow this poem as a guideline you certainly will make a wonderful father your kid is lucky to have someone that cares so much before he was even born for some kids aren't so lucky.

~Jacklyn

wow!!!!!!!............... i've read many poems but it was not that impressive.... when i read ur poem i really was very happy to read ur poem and i'm trying to read ur poem 1st. if poem writing is ur hooby don give it up. write more poems like this and impress everyone.and more over ur wife and son r really very very lucky to have u.
take care
malini

that is so beautiful! It reminds me exactly why i wanted kids sum day...i'm only fifteen and know i can never bare a child. but this just goes to show that a child does have a life...even before its born....hence the reason abortion is bad...but dats not da point.....it was simply amazing. and i loved it! I hope you enjoy your life with ur son...and never let him go...no matter how old he is.

No words can describe the emotion of such dept and deepness of meaning. it has a big, positive impact and effect , it has touched my insides and left me saying to you is is that is "off the hook" lol and really you have potential in the poetry industry and i like your style of writing!

Thumbs up!!!

Jade...:)

Great poem. You are really good.

Brought tears to my eyes ...You got mad talent

Fantastic 5/5 x x x

Brought a tear to my eye. Just beautiful, and so damn inspirational. 5/5. Amazing...

Gurdy x (GoddessOfWings)

OMG i'm just speechless