Killer Satisfaction

by Jacklyn   Jul 13, 2005


Along the beach I walked,
Bikini bottom inching up,
Showing a little of bare less chop,
I reached the bench still standing up,
As a mosquito landed on my butt,
Bit it and began sucking my blood,
I sat down with pay back at heart,
Killer satisfaction at the moment,
Never again will it bite me again,
This mosquito will have a grave,
In the hot sun and sands grains,
But every time I itch my ass,
Killer satisfaction remains within.

~not very good, but I think some people may enjoy it!~

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  • 19 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    LMAO I know that feeling hahaha...the itch that must be scratched! Hahaha!

    Peaces and Love Always From...

    //ari\\

  • 19 years ago

    by jaki

    haha, loved it

    *jackie*

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Lol. Nice one hun. Made me laugh :)
    But it also gave me the sneezes ^_^ hehe, crazy poem.

    Love yah sweet,
    - Kals.

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    haha that was brilliant.. I loved it :D.. the title made me think of something completely different.. but the mosquito killer.. yeh.. Well done

    :D:D:D:D Look im smiling so much now lol

    xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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