Comments : A slice of the knife shows the mystery

  • 19 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    good job really, i love the rhyming an it flows nicely. keep writing tiff!

  • 19 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Very intersting...I love it. You have a wonderful way with words and great rhyming. Lovely job my dear. -5-