Break up

by tiffany   Jul 13, 2005


I tried to be everything u wanted
I guess it wasn’t enough
you dont realize it
but u are washing yourself with my blood
that I have shed for you
false hopes
left to die in the corner
along beside myself
so your walking away
with out looking back
killing me a little bit more with every step that you take
so just keep on walking
while I remember all the good times
that fade away
as you leave me to die here,
right where I was before

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  • 18 years ago

    by adrienne

    I love this poem, just like all your other poems its amazing. you should write a book or something.

  • 19 years ago

    by amelia

    Excellent poem!
    so touching...
    u know u must read "murder or suicide" by me...its a longer version of this
    ur poem is do detail & deep
    5/5
    love
    amy

  • 19 years ago

    by Blair

    really good poem this is exactly how i feel about the guy that i juss lost.....yeah this is so gr8 10 thumbs up...lol...i dont have that many thumbs

  • 19 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    good poem once again tiff. keep writing!

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