by AnotherJournalEntry Jul 13, 2005
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
There once was a time when I wanted to give up |
by Kurt
Ok, i see how it is a song, and i understand the chorus part. To help carry a rhythm include maybe some imagery? You have a better sense of music than i do.. I just listen to it. But its not bad 4/5 here. |
Yup...This is mine! (but I had my cousin help with the tune) Thanks for all the comments!! |
by Nee
Was That Your Work?? LOL |
by Tom Swart
maybe we'll hear this on the box someday, not bad |
it's a song...so the lines that are repeated are the chorus. |