omg! stat strong hunn I'm so sorry for what happend. It msut be hard to even look at him now. I feel so bad for you to go through this sort of thing...and you were only 11.

my goodness thats horrible. well written but the story is a nightmear, if you ever wanna talk or anything at all. e-mail me at pimpprincess_87@yahoo.com

OMG THIS IS SO SAD.... great poem... but your uncle sounds sick (in a peverted way, obviously)... i'm so sorry taht you had to go through that... you wrote it very well... ubt it must of been hard... i'm so sorry... anyways... your very strong... so stay that way okies...

Rate me back sometime...

*To0oDLeZ*

*..KimiC..* XxXo0oXxX

Hun, i'm really sorry for what happened, and i wish the best of luck to you that everything gets better. the poem. It was great. I like the form, and the words aren't alwayz rhyming but that's what kept it from being boring cuz so long --> i also like that!
Great job! Keep it up!

Love Alwayz,
Katie Schettler

im sorry

Awesome poem! Keep writing.

Aww. I loved it. Keep writing. 5/5

you should've told long ago. you should've went to theepolice or somebody. i would've pulled a knife on him if that's the case.

Like some of the above said, you should tell someone, you have no clue how much better you'll feel. If you remember it as if it happened yesterday then you shoudl have no problem telling your story to ppl of authority, like many I'm sorry you had to go through what you did. Because you di go through all that misery I think your a stronger person than any of us can ever be. if you'd liek to talk ot me my email is giggle1988@hotmail.com I also have MSN
you can also contact me at andcrys14_17@yahoo.com

hey we have a lil in common read my poem so you will understand.. my poem titled ThE DaY My DaD ToOk My LiFe -TruE StOrY-

OH MY GOSH GIRL.. IM SO VERY SORRY... i can just imagine the pain u feel for lettin everyone read that still... im so sorry,... u should of told someone whenhe first done it.. but i understand.. u was probably scared cuz he had the knife... but seriously.... u should confront him about it.. and how bad it hurt u..a nd how u still gotta live tru it...

That is one scary ass story.
It's bad enough that he raped you, but he pulled a knife on you?

I admire your strength, but I dislike your choice. But then again, it's happend and all you can do now is stay strong.
I still think you should tell someone, though.
Give your Uncle what he deserves!!

I'm so sorry u had to go through that. your an extremely strong person. and this poem is brutally brilliant. lv A, x

That was a really great poem! Hang in there! 5/5 Keep it up and good luck in the future! Please check mine out!

dang girl you really are strong. just keep your head up and try not to look back.i know that should be really painfull.hopefully you could tell your parents what happened,some day. this poem is really good though..TRY 2 KEEP YOUR HEAD UP

Wonderful poem, however I feel bad for you! It is great you can write about it, so someone can hear..! I think though you should try and tell your parents somehow, so they now what happened with affecting your life..let nonone decide for you..! Lyz<3

you are absolutly amazing

omg wow...im soo sorry that happened to you. man it is amazing what people go through....I admire you for being so strong.... i can only imagine how hard it is for you to have a memory such as that one. especially since it is part of the family. i was raped but by my boyfriend and i go crazy all the time but u seem like ur doing all right and thats what i admire. well i hope u keep writing bc ur stuff is wonderfull! if u ever need to talk my addy is country_gurl_36@hotmail.com
love yas,
kayla

Omg girl I feel your pain! That was an amazing poem and you have so much talent and if it makes you feel any better..... I believe you.

on the bottom part u said u still see him...but y?

that is really good im so sorry it happened to you. i feel so lucky it hasnt happened to me yet