by ..eliSa*
Im speechless i trully am. i can not even imagine being in your shoes. the fact that you have been threatened to keep your mouth shut must be so hard and even if you do say something, whos goign to believe you?..in your mind u may think no1 at all will believe what you are saying but if ur parents trully lov eyou, they will hear u out. think about it, hundreds of poeple com eonto this site who are complete strangers and are able to read your story and believe it, whos to say that ur own family wont believe the pain u have suffered?..just a thought. i hope that this experience hasnt degraded you at all because this was not your fault one little bit. you cannot be held responsable for it or feel like any less of a person. hopefully this experience will make you a stronger person rather than the opposite. i dont knoe if what i have said has made u feel uncomfortable or upset because well, i am a complete stranger lol so i gues sill just stop now:P..i wish you all the best in the future. stay strong! keep up the good work, beautifully written. great job. |
by Nemesi
Im so sry that sick twisted monster did that to you if i could meet him i tie him up and make get screwed by men but then again he might like that i would kill him for you if i had the chance i know i dont know you but i feel like i have to say i love you in hope that it will make the pain go away im so sry but plz if you havent already told plz do so today every day you let it go by one more guy is getting away with their sick games he might be doing it to some else i hope you can live a great life and forget about it even happening plz if you need to talk my e mail is earthschildnemesis@yahoo.com |
Oh mah gosh! |
by Jess
OMG.... I am so sorry and your poem made me cry. I am so sorry that had to happen to you. It is just not right for young girls have to worry about being raped everyday by their love ones. I really think you deserved better than that and for your uncle he is sick. Even though this happen to you doesn't mean you had to hate yourself or your parents. They thought you were in good care but unfortunely you found out different. I am sorry. You should really go to someone now and get his butt put in jail. My thoughts and prayers are toward you forever. 5/5 |
Wow....powerful.....most people would not be able to write on this subject as openly as you did.....and telling about your own experience.....amazingly done |
by Hind
I love this poem.. |
by Hind
I love this poem.. |
by Hind
I love this poem.. |
by N M Lambert
I think this is probably the most upsetting thing i have ever read. good on you for writing about it, it must have been so hard. so sorry you have been through something like this. truely amazing poem xx |
by broken angel
This is so amazing and sad and horrible, and I know that nothing ANYONE says will ever make the pain go away completely. It will always be there, but I'm proud of you for how strong you are, I know it must have been hard to write that poem. You know, as well as I, that your uncle will rot in hell for what he did. I know the pain you must be feeling, and how those memories never seem to go away. It will take you forever to heal but eventually you will start to. Be strong, because you are an amazing person who deserves the best things in life. Best of luck with all your dreams. |
by Baby Rainbow
Aww thats really good, emotional. i like it, take kare hunni x x x |
by Shelby
OKay I have a few things. |
by Wallace
Excellent poem, i really enjoyed it good work 5/5. |
by xo kisses xo
*tear* that is so sad. i am so sorry that you had to go through that...no child, or adult, should have to go through rape and the pains of it. 5/5 great poem |
Wow, this poems touched me.....im so sorry........ . . . . . |
If u ever need to talk i will be here |
by N M Lambert
This is so heartbreaking. so well penned and so tragic. hope u r ok. xx |
by KELLiE SHEA
Amazing, and strong you are. unbelievable poem. truly astonishing. |
by Elyse
Omg and i thought my life sucked |
by PoEtiCmYme
Sorry |