that was good... i liked... keep writting... if you can will you comment on some of my stuff... thanks..xoxo

great poem! i love it! really sad..but true..keep it up!

Love, Taylor

wow that was kewl it made me think and i liked the line, no1 survives death and thx 4 the comment^^

Straight to the point, no beating around the bush.
I like your style of writing alot.
The question make me think.
4/5

Emma,

Sad and perplexing questions. Makes you think. I loved it. Keep it up.

Regards,

Steve

good poem, work on structure and you're set :)

your poems do seem meaningful...you say a lot with few words...keep writing.

xxx

Also a good poem but to short. The content in the poem is great but I think it can be worked out with more words, hardly have time to get the flow up in this poem before it's over.

Best wishes,
Patrik

I'll give u 5/5 becuz u made the effort
its a nice poem
should be longer
must rhyme..

That was so cool. Keep up the good work. You are very talented. *5/5*