your brother is a very talented writer, he really captured the pain and the emotion, well done

*jackie*

I loved this poem. very good rhyming.
absolutely beautiful even if it's so sad.
take care,
marjan

This is such an awesome poem; tell your brother good job. umm is he in the army or ne thing?

I've told my brother what you all have been saying about this poem, and i've shown him the comments as well.. my brother is not in the army now, but he has a big talent in writing. he has been in the army for 1 year, but thats because all boys has to join the army for at least 1 year here in Norway.