This is the best so far. I heart how you describe everything, I heart the image you painted in my head.

I can actually imagine the screams of the crowd and the beating of her heart. Very nicely done, M'dear. =)

My favourite lines were actually the whole poem.

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

This reminds me of eminem : ) its a great poem
think i'lll add u to my favourites...!!
can i ??

Wow You Are Really Good At Poetry!!

This is a amazing write, great job. i wish i could write like that.

Wow, wow, wow... the emotions in this... I'm completely speechless. You made me live through every stanza, feel every emotion that you fantastically described.
You have great talent.