Touching little love poem. :)

xxx

WONDERFUL! I like this poem alot, the lines where you talk about dreaming in medaphores is a good line. Like it alot. However, the poem dosent seem to be very diffrent from millions of others. good work, but find something to make it unique!

Are you sure you're single? You sound like you're in love, it's hard to believe you're not!

sacry Kane, scary.... ITS TO DAMN GOOD:D

Wonderfully written. The first stanza is my fave, because it's has some Cinderella style-

See you soon again
Lots of fun :D
Sabine

Aw very sweet classic love poem! Keep up the great work, actually i dont even need to say it, cause u always do!:D

Take care luv,
Ana*