You said

by .x. bloodstained rose .x.   Jul 14, 2005


You said that we were perfect
We were happy
You said that we were yin and yang
Dark and light, shyness and courage

You said that we would last
And that you love me
You said that there was no one more beautiful
And that there was no star brighter that the one in my eyes

You said that I’d never be unhappy
And that you’ll cheer me up when I am
You said that life was brilliant
And that we should not waste it

You said that you’d never leave me
I can’t believe I listened
You said that if I died you’d cry
Why did I believe you?

You said ‘its over’
And I cried so much
You said ‘ I hate you’
The pain was unbearable

Now look where I am
Following you
Wreaking you life
Like you did to me

My death didn’t harm you
You didn’t care
You acted like I was a stranger
And had no guilt

That knife you gave to me
Saying it’s our sign of love
Came in handy
When it slid trough my throat

I left you a note
Saying goodbye
Saying I’ll always be there
When your life messes up

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  • 19 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    aww this is so sad nice job keep it up 5/5 thanks for your comment

  • 19 years ago

    by yup

    Beautiful poem hun. I really enjoyed reading it. Excellent use of wording! Superb effort all round. 5/5

    Kel

    P.S. Thanks for commenting on my work, really appreciate it.

  • 19 years ago

    by sadgirl

    that was a great poem 5/5..thanks for commenting on my poem..much love and keep your head up..

  • 19 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Awww hun *tear*....how can someone do that.....newayz 5/5!!!!!!!!*Huggkes* <3 Elizabeth