I like this poem it reaches out to me. It really makes me feel the way you felt when you wrote this.

No poem is two short. as long as it has four lines then it is a poem. Not all goo, but yours is really good. I was thinking. With you talent to write poems. maby you could judg some of mine, and comment so i can get better at this. keep up the good work. Your Friend- Aaron

Wow. You could deffinetly tell you feel. And it sticks out you don't have to look for it. I really liked it!