My so called life

by Megin   Jul 14, 2005


It's a complicated fixture
it's a passive of laughs and tears
it's my so called life
after all these years,

Have no one to believe in me
have no one to care
wondering why I hold on to my so called life
wondering why I even dare,

All people do is look
all they see is what they see
but not one d.a.m.n person
knows what it's like being me,

I lost the one I love
I lost the one who chose to care
I lost the one who made me happy
I lost the one whose life they would spare,

The world, it turned against me
the people, they walked out
no one hears my crys at night
no one hears me shout,

I try to reach, but nothing to grab
I try to laugh, but I turn up sad
I try to stay strong, but I'm tired of this lie
I try to live, but I want to die,

So I welcome you to this complicated fixture
to this passive of laughs and tears
to my so called life
after all these years!

please vote and comment..it would really mean a lot to me..because this poem is true..and i meant every word in it! thanks

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  • 19 years ago

    by Larry

    Good poem -- bad grammar -- to many fragments. You can use complete sentences, and proper English, and still create beautiful work! Do not use conjunctions when writing! It seemed as if you hurried through this, and if you slowed down and think about it until you perfect it -- it will be inspirational and easy to read -- I started to give it a three, but then when I read that you meant every word of it -- I had to give you a four -- Channel those feelings into your work and be satisfied with nothing less than the best -- and you will be happy with your work

  • 19 years ago

    by Lauren nicole s.

    Omg i love tis poem its great!
    i went through all that in 8th grade and i can totally relate! my screen name: painfulsecrets13

    i only have a few poems and quotes but please vote and comment them!
    thankns!

  • 19 years ago

    by *NiCoLe*

    really good poem...keep up the good work!! thanxs for the comment

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