really good poem...keep up the good work!! thanxs for the comment

Omg i love tis poem its great!
i went through all that in 8th grade and i can totally relate! my screen name: painfulsecrets13

i only have a few poems and quotes but please vote and comment them!
thankns!

Good poem -- bad grammar -- to many fragments. You can use complete sentences, and proper English, and still create beautiful work! Do not use conjunctions when writing! It seemed as if you hurried through this, and if you slowed down and think about it until you perfect it -- it will be inspirational and easy to read -- I started to give it a three, but then when I read that you meant every word of it -- I had to give you a four -- Channel those feelings into your work and be satisfied with nothing less than the best -- and you will be happy with your work