by Poetic Tragedy08 Jul 14, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I think I need you |
ummm....wow thats a awesome poem!!! i loved it!! you are VERY talented!! even if you say you aint! |
by Ashli
ok, it's a very powerful message, but a couple lines didn't make sense...and the rhyming in a couple times seemed forced...could you maybe try to get it to flow a little smoother? |
by Renee
This was a beautiful poem. only a few spelling mistakes, but all in all the poem was very heartfelt. |
by allison
Wow, First of all you're an amazing writter and seconly you sound liek an amazing guy. Keep up the great work! |
by allison
Wow, First of all you're an amazing writter and seconly you sound liek an amazing guy. Keep up the great work! |