Wow, First of all you're an amazing writter and seconly you sound liek an amazing guy. Keep up the great work!
Love Always
Allison

Wow, First of all you're an amazing writter and seconly you sound liek an amazing guy. Keep up the great work!
Love Always
Allison

This was a beautiful poem. only a few spelling mistakes, but all in all the poem was very heartfelt.

Take care,
Renee

ok, it's a very powerful message, but a couple lines didn't make sense...and the rhyming in a couple times seemed forced...could you maybe try to get it to flow a little smoother?

ummm....wow thats a awesome poem!!! i loved it!! you are VERY talented!! even if you say you aint!
Amanda