by crystal Jul 14, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I'm laying here tonight |
good job! not as well written as some of your other poems bit this was a good one |
by Lisa
Most of this poem flowed very well, I like the reptition you used, good job one this one as well. |
by Patrik
I like the poem, it was well written, nice rhymes etc etc, but there was something "missing" in it, not sure what, couldn't put my finger on it really:( |
by Andrea
wow! girl your good! 5/5! |