wow! girl your good! 5/5!

I like the poem, it was well written, nice rhymes etc etc, but there was something "missing" in it, not sure what, couldn't put my finger on it really:(

Best wishes,
Patrik

Most of this poem flowed very well, I like the reptition you used, good job one this one as well.

good job! not as well written as some of your other poems bit this was a good one