by Lovemylove Jul 14, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
You beat me, and tear my flesh with ever cruel hateful word. I thought father's were suppose to care, but I know you don't. I try to please you I really do, but it seems the more I do, the less you see in me. Well all thats going to change, because after this maybe you'll see maybe you wont, but all I know is its time for my suicide. So as I write this note tonight I cry because I really don't want to die but I can't take this abuse. I know it will never stop unless I die.So I take out my knife, and watch it gleam in the moonlight. Without another word I stab it into my emotionless heart. Within in the next few minutes my suicide is complete. |
by Angie
Deep Poem, and i'm glad u aren't doin it....ur a really talented writer! Keep up da awesome work! |
deep but im glad u arent doing it u have talent. thanks for the comment im glad that u like my poem. |
by Lovemylove
No I aint doing that its just a poem, I was just in a black mood. No worries ya'll. Thanks for commenting on my poem ya'll. |
by stephanie
this was good. but hopefully your not thinkin about doing that. |
by Liz
Wow that's deep hope you don't do that thou ! |