by Alissa Jul 14, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Mommy and Daddy got into a fight |
by Michelle
WOW this is an inspiration to me.. because it actually applies to me to in some ways.. check out some of my poems |
by Noir Fleur
That was sooo adorable, yet sad at the same time...really deserves my 5/5. |
by Ashli
this is very touching..i loved how you had the letter in there, and still managed to make it rhyme...very well done! had a beautiful flow, and nice word choice! good job! |
by Jordan
this is so hard to read...because in a sense I feel like my dad left me too. Even though hes around hes not ya know? Well excellent poem... |
by Stephanie
wow thats a great poem i love it!!! keep it up 5/5!!! |