Your in Control

Good beginning, liked the flow and the way the words came out.. in the second stanza, i think the last line should be changed to

And get ready for flight

just because of syllable differences and i think it'd help the flow..

You're behind the wheel
It's up to you where you take it

liked the ongoing metaphor of driving a car, even th0 its only in a few lines.. its so true.. the last stanza ends it with nothing but truth.. good poem.. basically all i can say.. third poem ive read of yours and theyre all about life.. i can never write like that with any real accuracy.. good job.. 5/5.. pZ

That was awesome!! i agree i think..something to think about for sure.
take care x x x

Awesome poem!! i really liked it! it flowed well with a great theme.
take care, xoxoxo

I don't know what to say.. this poem is great... it's very inspiering

awesome poem, very true. take care