nice job! you have a lot of talent! keep it up!

this poem is da bomb!!!! ya rock!!! Amanda

Hmm.. I would love to see what you come up with when you write without rhymes. You do that so well, you should try something new.

So smooth a flawless with a good theme. Thanks for the good read 5/5

oooooh, very cool! i like this poem, it's original and so true! awesome job!
love always,
abcede

Yay that was really good :D i liked it a lot and had a lot of good things to say :D yay!!!!

this was excellent! its so true and so many dont even realize it you did a great job getting your msg across the only advise i give is to work on even ing your flow the rhyming scheme change at least 3 times but still 5/5!!

This poem i made go w/2 rhyme schemes.. i know how to keep a pattern.. i just wanted to change it :P

good poem, nice rhyming...5/5

good poem, nice rhyming...5/5

Very nice...good message you put in there...and it flows well.

xxx

nice work!
luv courtie

awesome poem, very true. take care

I don't know what to say.. this poem is great... it's very inspiering

Awesome poem!! i really liked it! it flowed well with a great theme.
take care, xoxoxo

That was awesome!! i agree i think..something to think about for sure.
take care x x x

Good beginning, liked the flow and the way the words came out.. in the second stanza, i think the last line should be changed to

And get ready for flight

just because of syllable differences and i think it'd help the flow..

You're behind the wheel
It's up to you where you take it

liked the ongoing metaphor of driving a car, even th0 its only in a few lines.. its so true.. the last stanza ends it with nothing but truth.. good poem.. basically all i can say.. third poem ive read of yours and theyre all about life.. i can never write like that with any real accuracy.. good job.. 5/5.. pZ