if all your poems are as good as this, then no one would ever know you were a beginner, keep up the good work and i will have a look at some of your other stuff =)

*jackie*

thax i wil read some of your stuff

That was really good... i loved... keep writing ur really good at it... thanks for the comment.... xoxo

good rhyming. i liked it alot

Short.. But Brilliant... Feel you could have made more out of it though.. Great write, KInd regards from Kane