by jello Jul 15, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I’m lost in the crowd. I feel like a ghost. I’m forgotten. I’m alone. I try to hide my face, I’m so ugly. I try to hide the scars from everyone but me. |
by Sole
I liked the concept - the song was very long though, like ^ I think the chorus should be after every two verses instead of just one. |
That was straightforward and to the point, not cover ups there. I am a cutter, I wish I could say I was an ex cutter but seeing as I just cut yesterday, that really wouldn't work. I thought I was really good, but a bit lengthy, Maybe you might want to add the chorus after every two verses instead of every one? Just a thought. I wish I could hear it to music. |
by Natalie
This was really good! I can relate to it alot! I really enjoyed reading it! Keep it up 5/5 |
by Kaylee
Oops sorry it was slang. my mistake lol |
by Kaylee
I'm not a cutter nor do I like reading poems on the subject but I know that cutting poems aren't just about that but mnaybe lonliness and needing understanding maybe. But I don't know if love poem section was right to put it. |