wow! that is a really good poem! i would give it to my friend as a b-day gift if her b-day hadn't already passed. cuz she's like the person who stares at me and my arms, and hates who i am. but that's one of my favorites! read some of mine when you have the chance! keep up the good work! :) |
by Renee
umm wow. I'm not usually one to read and like cutting poems, but this was great. I am en ex-cutter myself. It seems to describe all the feelings one feels when in that situation. I really like the way you repeated the chorus. it's so wrong, cutting, but this song just seems so right. but try to put it in a song format maybe. |
by Polly
I liked this, but i thought it would be so much better as a song. The chorus was good, and I liked the way it was repeated. Keep up the writing, and i hope you succeed in making it into a song. |
I really enjoyed reading this poem!! I use to cut myself every day really bad, but now I try really hard to stop, the hardest thing I ever had to do...I relate so much to this, hope that you are okay?? I loved the way you repeated it...Great job =0) |
by Allison
That was awsome. I think that it said a lot. You are very talented. Keep up the good work. *5/5* |
by Juls
Well done I like it alot. You caught what"cutters" or "ex-cutters" feel like I think..I dont know if you know because of experience but either way it was great. Just alittle spelling error though: |
by Emma
Coming from someone who used to cut it was amazing. i think you hit every feeling involed. great write. |
by Bridgette
Wow this was really good. I'm not a cutter nor have I ever been one, but I think this is really good. It would make a great song. Great job! |
by Kaylee
I'm not a cutter nor do I like reading poems on the subject but I know that cutting poems aren't just about that but mnaybe lonliness and needing understanding maybe. But I don't know if love poem section was right to put it. |
by Kaylee
Oops sorry it was slang. my mistake lol |
by Natalie
This was really good! I can relate to it alot! I really enjoyed reading it! Keep it up 5/5 |
That was straightforward and to the point, not cover ups there. I am a cutter, I wish I could say I was an ex cutter but seeing as I just cut yesterday, that really wouldn't work. I thought I was really good, but a bit lengthy, Maybe you might want to add the chorus after every two verses instead of every one? Just a thought. I wish I could hear it to music. |
by Sole
I liked the concept - the song was very long though, like ^ I think the chorus should be after every two verses instead of just one. |