Oh my God, that is so sad! Is it really true? Other than the sad subject, the poem was pretty good, gave it a 5. Keep writing you'll get better and better ;)
Thx for ur comment! Keep it up*hugs*

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

I can't realy say much about this...it is so sad, the last lines brought tears to my eyes. It is written well, the evets unfold well. But some parts of it might allow your reader to lose intrest. good poem though

~Breeze

Wow amazing poem! So very sad was this a true? You wrote this with great feeling and it was very touching. Take Care! Brooke~

omg thats so sad...is it true? 5/5 great job

Very nicely written. 5/5 none to less. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

*> : PainOfOne

Wow so real
great job well written
i gave it 5
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