very nice !!! I really liked it! your heart is showing through your words, nice. I'm adding you to my favorites list. nice to see you there!

Your poetry is very interesting. I can feel your emotion and confusion in this poem. I really enjoy reading your work.

Very nice!!! Wonderful job!!!

So deep and emotional, i liked it very much
i wanted to tell u that i added u to my favorites ^^
u rock! haha bye, take care

pili

This is sweet yet so cautious.Very well written.great flow, and so honest of emotion/thought.(Plus it was written on my birthday).I hope this all worked out for the best for you.