OMG! THIS IS LIKE MY NIGHT, EVERY NIGHT! So u have nightmares evry night, huh? So do I, but urs will go away, mine never does...lucky...good poem, though; 5/5!

Hey i really liked that.. i dont have nightmares prolly b/c i do the read till your dead asleep thing.. but the poem was still really good.. thanks for the comment.. bye bye EJ

great poem, nightmares i hate 'em.

WOW 5/5 GREAT WRK KEEP IT UP
AND THX FOR THE COMMENT ON MY POEM:)

This is so good, the description of the nightmare is so frightening. Perfect how you made the reader feel that it would happen again and again.

Waremest regards,

Steve

Great poem. The flow was incredible and theimagery was great. I know how bad nightmares can be and you captured the feeling magnificently. Good job:) And thank you for the comment on my poem. It really meant alot!

This is a fantastic poem!! It's one of those where you can just visualize and it's wonderful! Keep it up! Thank you so much btw for commenting on mine! It's means so much!! GL with those nightmares btw!

~Haley