I really like this one :) Has emotion in it and I love the way it refers to the candle and it running out and you kinda do :P

I can defiantly relate to this poem. I loved the way you composed it. 5/5 none to less. Take care and keep writing (always))xx:

*> : PainOfOne

heyy.. ur an awsome writter! yay fanx 4 da comment n keep yp da great work mwAzz.. p.s adding u 2 my faveZ :):)

That is REALLY good! The way you continued to re-introduce the candle was great, you put it in at just the right times! I'm extremely impressed, that was very good! by the way, I would really appreciate it if you would comment and vote on my poem 'My Realm'.

I fall to the floor as the candle goes out...