wow amazing song its really hits home i like how it repeats it self excellant glad to hear there ok noow your a great guy.

Hey! Your pretty good, with lots of potential. I have to say tho, your poems fit nicer as songs, your definately a music person at heart.Keep it up... Though there are song writers forums that I use as well for my songs. Maybe you should check some out? Lots of luck to you, stay strong. :)