Confusion

by JamesP   Jul 15, 2005


Well all these words
That leave my mouth
Seem to bury me
Further and further down

But why
Do I feel this way
Why do I hurt this way
Confusion I just can't seem to
Subside
In my mind
Confusion
It's all inside

Well all these thoughts
That leave my mind
Seem to bury me
Further and further down

But why
Do I feel this way
Why do I hurt this way
Confusion it keeps me
from reaching these goals
that fly high
in my mind
Confusion
It's all inside

*Really Really old poem turned song. So it pretty much sucks. I think. If you have another opinion I'd like to hear it.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Just Lisa

    Hey, well in my opinion I think this poem was good!!! Nice job . . . Oh and thanks alot for the comment on my poem . . . it means the world!!! Awesome poem though . . . 5/5 for sure!!!
    *Lisa*

  • 19 years ago

    by Marjan

    really great poem. I enjoyed reading it.
    take care,
    marjan

  • 19 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    I completely disagree. The complex repeating pattern has potential, and it has incredible flow and form. You don't know what good is, kid! 5/5
    Car