I completely disagree. The complex repeating pattern has potential, and it has incredible flow and form. You don't know what good is, kid! 5/5
Car

really great poem. I enjoyed reading it.
take care,
marjan

Hey, well in my opinion I think this poem was good!!! Nice job . . . Oh and thanks alot for the comment on my poem . . . it means the world!!! Awesome poem though . . . 5/5 for sure!!!
*Lisa*