hey,
i think that your poems are good! but...you should try and write some diffrent styles of poems! because then you can expand your writing skills! but...really good job on the ones you have written so far!

leanna

hm pretty good! u commented on one of mine so i did the same for urs haha. u need a different style i didnt get that poemy feekin u kno ?
xoxo
Jenna

Im glad for you!!!!!!!!! great poem!!!!!
~lotta luv~
~britty~