hey jacob, I liked this poem.
very well written.
could you read my poem"pure love"?
thanks for sharing this poem with us.
I really enjoyed reading it.
take care,
marjan

i really like this poem...i also read ur other one about parents and drugs being rold models...loved that one too... I know how you feel, and I love the fact tht u choose poetry to express urself... I want to get to know u...so if you want e-mail me sometime.
xoxJennyxox@excite.com