Lovers Sanity

by Jacklyn   Jul 15, 2005


Counter clockwise clocks,
Violent thunderstorms with no clouds,
As the cat is chased by the mouse
You and me together,

Weeds fill the fields,
No flowers bloom again.
Trees torched with no leafs,
Standing in my doorway with no door.

Hurt and angered with no tears,
Baring a smile without a mask,
A painting with no paint,
A whale tailless and ashore.

As green clouds pass by no wind,
You stare upon my body,
Gently place a hand upon my face.
A tear begins to glide from your glistening eyes.

As sand crashes upon the ocean,
And fish eat all the sharks,
Blood cutting the knife,
It’s like music with no sound.

Lightly your lips gently touch my neck,
When everything I’m certain of slowly disappears,
Wondering if this could be real,
Because I lose all sense of reality with you,
Do you love me the way I love you?

~Weird, it is just the meaning I am trying to get across is that love changes things, it was fun to write, if you do not get it I am not sure if I wrote for people to understand,~

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  • 19 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    YES!!!!! That was AWESOME!!!!!! 5/5 Everything was reversed...backwards....very interesting! :D Glad i got to read this one...now i'm off to see your others.

    Peaces and Love Always For You...

    //ari\\

  • 19 years ago

    by Roni

    GREAT poem.
    I'll think of a title for this.
    and I'll tell ya, when you get back.

    Lylac,
    ~Roni~

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    It's like the reverse and unimagineable part to love. That side you can't explain you have pretty well summed up. Love it, Unfortunatley my brain can't think of any titles but hey; i'll get back to you soon.

    Have fun <3
    - Luvoo, Kals.