A very sweet poem. But aren't you only 16? lol, maybe you were writing from your mother's perspective? Or a relative who has a child who graduated?

I'm not going to bother guessing, I just know it's a very nice poem.

I loved this poem. I'm guessing you wrote this from your mothers perspective, because your only 16. It was very well written though. Keep it up xX

Sounds like a loving mother...lovely...really captured the emotion from her perspective...and I like how you fit angel into this one too. :)

xxx

OMG!! i started to tear up on this one. I have a 15 mo. old. and made me think of her when had her and what would it would be like when she does graduate. I just loved it.

awww cute poem...so cute...*tear* ok good peom...lol...5/5!!! awesome job! luv yas mwah

-kayla-